Added: Jun 5, 2010
From: mzzjudylee
Duration: 0:6
(: 40 comments. Don't want no weak sauce. No puny little comments, okay? Even though I do fail at writing. . . . . . . . . . . . Convinced that he had escaped his dad, Nick slammed the door behind him and kicked the grass beneath him, chucking a huge mound of dirt from the earth. However, an aggravated groan escaped his lips at the sound of his dad's voice again. "Nicholas! You do not walk away from me when I am talking!" He said sternly, his gaze piercing as he narrowed his eyes. "Gosh, would you stop treating me like such a kid!" He shouted back, the veins in his neck now visible as it emerged from under his pale flesh. "I will stop treating you like a kid when you stop acting like one." He replied back, a daunting edge present in his voice. "What the hell is that supposed to mean?" Nick gritted through his teeth, clenching his fists tightly together. "You're still living under my roof, and I am paying your bills. So, when you actually decide to do something with your life and make an earning to support yourself, that's when I'll stop treating you like some immature adolescent. Do you understand me?" Nick felt like he had been slapped across the face, the words a blow to his pride. However, instead of waving the white flag, surrendering, he pressed on, "Instead of giving me the lecture, why don't you simply just tell me to get the fuck out of your house?" "Nicholas Jerry Jonas!" His dad roared, his eyes wide with a mix of fury and lament. "Admit it, Dad. You've never been proud of me. Nothing I ever do will ever be enough. I'm the son you never wanted." He said, his heart aching at his own words. The memories of the past flashed in his mind. . .all those times he had been neglected, left to take care of himself. His vision misty, Nick's dad reached out toward Nick, his voice full of sorrow and regret, "Nicholas. . .you know that's not true—" "As much as I wish it wasn't true, I think it is and there's nothing I can do about that. Do us both a favor and why don't you go back to your old routine?" Without another word, Nick walked away, down the block, desperate to increase the distance between his dad and him. . . . . . . . . . Grazing his knuckles against the wooden door and knocking on it, Nick huffed, licking his dry, parched lips. Out of desperation, his feet had led him here but as soon as the door opened, he wished he hadn't. "Nick? What are you doing here?" Naomi asked, batting her eyelashes rapidly. She opened the door wider, welcoming him inside. Her house was full of décor, resembling model homes in those home furnishing magazines. It was quite grandeur but still managed to retain a comforting feeling. "I. . .just needed to clear my head, and I got into a fight with my—" Nick struggled to articulate his words, constantly licking his lips. Pulling him close to her, her eyes twinkled with lust as she whispered in his ear, "I think I know just what you need to clear your mind." A smirk playing across her face, she led Nick up the stairs and into her room, locking the door behind them. Seductively, she pushed him onto the bed, climbing on top of him, nestling herself on his crotch. Leaning in, she connected her lips to his, kissing him fervently. As he slipped his tongue inside of her and wrestled hers for dominance, she moaned against his lips, the limb between Nick's legs growing hard. "Where are your parents?" Nick groaned against her lips, playing with the elastic band of her shorts. "Out." She breathed heavily, stripping herself of her shirt. Connecting her lips with his again, she began to trail down, leaving soft kisses on his neck. Groaning with desire, the only thing on his mind was the corrupt sin and lust. Slipping his wife beater off of his chiseled body, he flipped her over so now that he was dominant. Sucking on her sweet flesh, his tongue grazed down her neck and down to the top of her breasts. Skillfully, unfastening the clasps, he lapped his tongue over her erected mounds. As rough, lustful moans continued to fill the airs, Nick finally pulled himself out of her, rolling over to the side, his chest heaving up and down. Both Naomi's and his body were covered in sweat after the vigorous activity, their hearts pumping rapidly against their chests. However, there was still the familiar empty pit in his stomach, a dry well. . .
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Rating: 5.0' max='5' min='1' numRaters='6' rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#overall ( ratings) Views: 489 Comments: 44
nightowlbaybaybaby Says:
Jun 5, 2010 - Nick, not Naomi! Miley is going to fill that empty pit your stomach, not that bitch! And are you kidding me? You a bad writer? That's a joke because you're incredible 3
mandojbfan Says:
Jun 5, 2010 - ugh why didnt he go to Miley instead of Naomi???
bubblebear321 Says:
Jun 5, 2010 - I feel sorry for Nick AND his Dad... they both need to just talk. Ugh, Nick! Don't don't do this! Your a amazing writer!!!!
iluvjb4ever123 Says:
Jun 5, 2010 - WHAT THE FUCK, NICHOLAS. -grabs knife- do I need to cut off your balls like I did for Nick in HSB?! xD
xoholliewood Says:
Jun 5, 2010 - STUPID stupid nick i cnt believe he went to naomi anyways i loved it 3 :-)
GuitarGirlMairead93 Says:
Jun 5, 2010 - Poor Nick, But SERIOUSLY!! Naomi, really? NOT the right thing to do!!! P.S You're a GREAT writer, don't think just because people cannot be bothered to comment means anything different... 3
jadeflynn94 Says:
Jun 5, 2010 - ugh nick is stupid. naomi's a bitch and mileys great. and your an amazing writer. ! dont say any otherwise.
xstarzxforevax Says:
Jun 5, 2010 - Aww i feel bad forr nickk ! But.. i think he should have gone to miley instead of naomi ! That wass a bad choicee !
pinkrulz17 Says:
Jun 5, 2010 - ewwwwww i dont like naomi. SKANK! i think nick and miley should run away together and go to tennesee and start a ranch with horses. lots of horses and chickens and goats!!!! then they decide to get married then BAM! they have a baby and live happily ever after :D
PrincessesOfLove Says:
Jun 5, 2010 - he. is. dead. niley might not be official but still. i loved it. you rock ;)
NileyFan30 Says:
Jun 5, 2010 - @mzzjudylee OH! aha gotcha :D
softballchick2197 Says:
Jun 5, 2010 - aww nick! what did you go and do that for!?! miley's gonna be pissed...
carlatXD Says:
Jun 6, 2010 - what how could he do that !!!
kitkatkirsty Says:
Jun 6, 2010 - Nick! You shouldn't go to Naomi to make yourself feel better!! Even though him and Miley are not officially together, its still not right!! Love this story, you're an amazing writer :)
joeandnickarehawt Says:
Jun 6, 2010 - what the hell nick! NAOMI?!?! WHAT ARE YOU THINKING??
cupcakexscream Says:
Jun 6, 2010 - he is stupid:(
L0veMe4Me123 Says:
Jun 6, 2010 - i absolutly adore the way you write. the extra detail you always put make it so much easier to picture what is going on, and understand the story. Its just plain amazing
dreamingxsweetly Says:
Jun 6, 2010 - nick why did you do that. you know you like miley. and that was not a fail whatsoever it was amazing. fantastic. awesome. i love this story.
mileyjobrofan93 Says:
Jun 6, 2010 - ahhhh im mad. hate naomi. shes a whore lol anyways nileyyyyyyy 3
Theresaaugen Says:
Jun 6, 2010 - i can't believe it. :/ omg.
smilemiles92 Says:
Jun 6, 2010 - I Love This!(: Your an amazing writer! :D
Mitchix33 Says:
Jun 6, 2010 - wtf. nick jonas.get your ass home and go and do bad things with miley :D not that naomi hoe. this was amazing. which means. COOKIE :D -gives you cookie for writing amazing- ;)
teammercury9546 Says:
Jun 7, 2010 - OMG! That was so bad of Nick!
jesusluv1996 Says:
Jun 12, 2010 - NOO!
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hsmjordan95 Says:
Jun 5, 2010 - What?! Fail at writing?! I DO NOT think so missy :) Aww Nick come on! Don't go back to her... just work things out with your dad! :/